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A Couple Days from Cheyenne

By Jim Anderson

A couple days from Cheyenne, out of food and luck, we follow the shallow river. In late afternoon, a lone, dappled horse grazes on the far bank.

“It’s a wild horse,” George says. “I’d eat horse.”

I have the rifle. It’s an easy shot.

“Go ahead,” George whispers. “Before he spooks.”

I take aim. The horse lifts its head and looks across the river at us. George and I stand still in the shadows, hardly breathing. I start to squeeze the trigger. It isn’t right. I know it isn’t right. We’re almost to Cheyenne, and a long way from starving.

I wrote this story for the 100 Word Challenge #341 at Velvet Verbosity.

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  1. Craig says

    July 30, 2013 at 7:45 am

    I like the the use of present tense in that first sentence, and it’s just a neat piece overall.

  2. Rick C. says

    July 28, 2013 at 10:00 pm

    I liked this. I really thought he was going to shoot… there’s a huge story that’s hinted at here, too. Nicely done.

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