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Lights

By Jim Anderson

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A young lieutenant sat with his back against a stone wall and his shirt front soaked through with blood. He was bare-headed, and looked about fifteen. He stared up at Gunther. “Lights,” he whispered.

Something like that.

Gunther knelt and took out a canteen. The lieutenant shook his head. “Lights,” he said.

“We’ve got plenty of light, sir. All we need.” Gunther poured a little water on the man’s head. He wasn’t sure why.

It was quiet a minute. Quieter, anyway.

There was rifle fire in the village down the road.

Gunther looked at the lieutenant. He wasn’t looking back.


I wrote this story for the 100 Word Challenge #343 at Velvet Verbosity.

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  1. Craig Towsley says

    August 19, 2013 at 1:51 pm

    Nice little piece – My favourite part “He wasn’t sure why.” it kinda sums up everything.

  2. Rick C. says

    August 19, 2013 at 12:30 pm

    Wow… nice ending.

  3. barbara says

    August 17, 2013 at 12:00 pm

    beautiful in a very sad way.

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