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The Parisian Sky

By Jim Anderson

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In the Latin Quarter, we were given a dusky room with an alley view. I frowned. I grumbled. “The room is dismal,” I told the proprietor.  “It looks nothing like your website.” He was as old as the cobblestones.  

He smiled, though, and moved us to the attic. It had a view of the sky. The Parisian sky is much the same as Cleveland’s. “But it is Paris, dear,” Janet said. “Remember why we’re here.” She stood on tip-toe and kissed me. “Twenty-five years!”

Later, on the rumpled bed, I stroked her bare shoulder and considered the review I’d write.


I wrote this story for the 100 Words Challenge #334 at Velvet Verbosity.

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  1. Robyn Greenhouse says

    June 6, 2013 at 9:53 pm

    I think even an attic room in Paris would be beautiful!

    • Jim says

      June 7, 2013 at 9:41 am

      I agree. But some people are never happy.

  2. Velvet Verbosity says

    June 5, 2013 at 11:54 pm

    Lovely, seemingly effortless!

    • Jim says

      June 7, 2013 at 9:40 am

      Thanks. I especially like that it seems effortless. What I’m going for!

  3. Jim says

    June 5, 2013 at 6:20 pm

    Or as someone said, “Living well is the best revenge.” Not sure the narrator in this piece gets that!

  4. Sam Edge, Writer says

    June 5, 2013 at 1:40 pm

    Revenge is sweet

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